Left4DeathInFire's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Wars of Monuments]

Fun but...

The mouse kind of took away from the gameplay. Try using Mouse.hide(); and startDrag on the custom cursor. The gameplay was fine, and the music did get tiring after awhile.

[Help Silhouette Man Live]

Cool!

I liked it, It was very fun, The most I have made was 32 seconds lol

[Crunchdown]

Cool but...

I found a few glitches like when I got the Kill 200 Guys skill points, It didn't show my amount instead it said NaN and nice Bioshock Reference, A Man Chooses, A Slave Obeys.

[sonic hedgehog hero pt2]

Hmm...

Well... It was very inventive. I liked the story, I guess most people hadn't played the 1st one. You have a good thing in progress. But:
1. Don't use low quality sprites and don't cut around them. I saw that you had low quality sprites in that cutscene where Sonic transformed.
2. Make a hitTest box at the bottom of the screen, So If anyone falls off, they come back up.
3. When on Cutscenes don't make indivual boxes just make a box at the bottom of the screen and have a portrait of the character.
Work on it and It will be really good. Oh, and Don't break it into parts unless you hit the upload limit. It's kinda annoying.

jamalTBC responds:

sorry the 3rd one will probabley be the last one

[Platformer game demo]

Well...

This has potential to be great and I have also seen the tutorial on youtube where you got this from and I have benefitted from it as well but, maybe you should make some original character designs and backgrounds, Don't just follow the tutorial word for word.

[Tycoon Game Tutorial]

Thank you...

Unlike the person below me, You will actually see my tycoon game soon. It will be utterly customizable. Look out for it.

[Don't Press What?]

Okay...

I will not bash your for making this game yet, I will tell you how to improve it. There are many successful games like this one in the Portal. I must say that the difficulty was quite poor you could plainly see the answers. Make them more challenging. The graphics were also bad. The backgrounds can be simple yet, attractive, fiddle around in your color window and see what you can find. The buttons were at sometimes unresponsive try adding a rectangle in the "Hit" frame of the button. I hope you can improve this game and get your score up.

[Stick Ragdoll]

Well

Considering that there are like 500 of these around the Internet, that shows your originality and also considering that there are 250 tutorials about how to make these and I can't be sure whether you actually made this. I gave you a 3/10. 3 for music and background.

[Save/Load Tutorial]

Nice!

This was really helpful and you explained well. To the man below me. You could make it so that once the item is in your inventory have a variable called "filled" and set it such as:
[ var filled = 0;
if (itemSlot1 = itemSlot2){
filled = 1
}
]
And, Instead of the object automatically going into the spot, have a picture of the item, and put this with the save and load functions and voila!

[Advanced Sprites Tutorial]

Thank you!

Your tutorial helped me soo much! If you would be as kindly to look at my new flash trailer for Chao PC, my upcoming games, I would dedicate that entire flash to you. I know it isn't a lot but, you really did help me.